kind of heavy
kind of short
kind of loud
you know the sort
clingy clothes
and heaps of hair
ample cleavage
some to spare
draped in baubles
sparkly heels
makes a living
makin’ deals;
nice enough
but I can’t tell -
what’s she really
tryin’ to sell?
Thursday, December 2, 2010
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makes me wonder on which album did you wrote this?
I liked liked the rhyming J!!
Hi, Joaquin. I hope you had a great Thanksgiving. This one made me smile. Yep, I have seen her (baubles, heels, etc.). I love "some to spare," too. When you find out what she's selling, please let me know:)
Great lines - and verse. You really fleshed this one out! I can actually "see" her. ;P
Ah, great poem here!! Like the itals at the end, emphasizes the questioning mind.
Eww...we all know one. Sounds like (one of) my brother's girlfriend(s). And a couple of his ex-wives. Gross.
Vic
PS: Happy holidays.
Where are you??
the rhythm is wonderful.
P.S. - I'm hoping to be back home by Thursday for your next posting. If not, I had to come by to say Merry Christmas and happy New Year. Best wishes to you, Joaquin!
Joaquin,
hope the holy days do good to you and your rhymes. may the new year carries sweet words to your heart.
Joaquin - wishing you the best of everything in the coming year. I miss you. Hope all is well.
She seems lovely (Ample cleavage. Ample cleavage! :P). Where can I find her? :)
More importantly, people are getting worried about where can they find you?
Hoping you are enjoying your time off. Happy new year, Joaquin.
Okay, I'll quit bugging you for a little while:)
Just had to say thinking of you. I hope all is well.
Joaquin, where are you? Hope all is well...?
J
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