Thursday, December 2, 2010

Aversetising


kind of heavy

kind of short

kind of loud

you know the sort


clingy clothes

and heaps of hair

ample cleavage

some to spare


draped in baubles

sparkly heels

makes a living

makin’ deals;


nice enough

but I can’t tell -

what’s she really

tryin’ to sell?


14 comments:

utopianfragments said...

makes me wonder on which album did you wrote this?

Kits said...

I liked liked the rhyming J!!

Julie said...

Hi, Joaquin. I hope you had a great Thanksgiving. This one made me smile. Yep, I have seen her (baubles, heels, etc.). I love "some to spare," too. When you find out what she's selling, please let me know:)

K.Lawson Gilbert said...

Great lines - and verse. You really fleshed this one out! I can actually "see" her. ;P

Terresa said...

Ah, great poem here!! Like the itals at the end, emphasizes the questioning mind.

Christine said...

Eww...we all know one. Sounds like (one of) my brother's girlfriend(s). And a couple of his ex-wives. Gross.

Vic

PS: Happy holidays.

Karen said...

Where are you??

sarah said...

the rhythm is wonderful.

Julie said...

P.S. - I'm hoping to be back home by Thursday for your next posting. If not, I had to come by to say Merry Christmas and happy New Year. Best wishes to you, Joaquin!

utopianfragments said...

Joaquin,
hope the holy days do good to you and your rhymes. may the new year carries sweet words to your heart.

K.Lawson Gilbert said...

Joaquin - wishing you the best of everything in the coming year. I miss you. Hope all is well.

Aniket said...

She seems lovely (Ample cleavage. Ample cleavage! :P). Where can I find her? :)

More importantly, people are getting worried about where can they find you?

Hoping you are enjoying your time off. Happy new year, Joaquin.

Julie said...

Okay, I'll quit bugging you for a little while:)

Just had to say thinking of you. I hope all is well.

Ink Champagne said...

Joaquin, where are you? Hope all is well...?
J