Hanging over
Bethlehem
A hush, a star
and Seraphim
huddled in
the straw and earth
a virgin wept
while giving birth
Both euphoric
and confused
shepherds stumbled
and perused
the empty streets
the pens and sheds
a chorus ringing
in their heads
From the east
the wise discerned
a different route
for their return
as Herod tossed
across the plain
sleepless in
suspicious reign
A silent night
pierced by the cry
of a baby
near the sty
son of David,
Abraham,
a shepherd who
would be a lamb;
A guest who cursed
his rotten luck
in his bed
for being stuck
by the barn
and now the din
of God as He
pulled on His skin
Bethlehem
A hush, a star
and Seraphim
huddled in
the straw and earth
a virgin wept
while giving birth
Both euphoric
and confused
shepherds stumbled
and perused
the empty streets
the pens and sheds
a chorus ringing
in their heads
From the east
the wise discerned
a different route
for their return
as Herod tossed
across the plain
sleepless in
suspicious reign
A silent night
pierced by the cry
of a baby
near the sty
son of David,
Abraham,
a shepherd who
would be a lamb;
A guest who cursed
his rotten luck
in his bed
for being stuck
by the barn
and now the din
of God as He
pulled on His skin
4 comments:
Merry Christmas, Joaquin! and many wonderful poems to come... :)
Beautifully portrays the birth of the Savior.
You have shown us the duality of that most important event. The very humanness of Christ's birth - and the divinity of it all.
I found the last two stanzas very (I can't think of a good word - so for lack of better) avant-garde. I must say the last two lines were "wow".
Impressive, as ever.
nice piece!
have a great season..
peace.
Beautiful enough to sing from the Marrow, was the loveliness
Of this poetic carol!
You managed to tell
What is a timeless
Classic, yet spin
And garnish it
Into poetic
Newness!
Man! How I wish
I'd only read this
On the actual day
Of Christmas!
Snatch JOY!
One.
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