We’ve labored in your grand machines,
you corner office libertines,
we built your smoke and mirror screens
while burying your go-betweens;
with avarice, with arrogance
with no regard for consequence
your words will make no difference
when you collect your recompense
we’ll build a new economy
with music, paint and poetry -
when words become our currency
we’ll learn to use them carefully
the banker and the Bedouin
will stand and sing in unison -
as sentinels, as bastions
regardless of our origin
Doesn’t matter what you tell us
you have nothing new to sell us
peddle deference as rebellious
but your hoaxes won’t propel us
engineer some new afflictions
to endorse some new addictions
blur some facts to grease the fiction
flavor helps reduce the friction
we’ll build a new democracy
with music, paint and poetry -
when harmony is liberty
we’ll play it out responsibly
the grand duke and the destitute
will shrug their station and repute
to raise their voices, resolute
united in the same pursuit
although we’re bruised and bandaged
in a world fouled and damaged
by disasters you’ve repackaged
and the faith that you mismanaged
we’ll still tear down every rubric
of each populist and maverick;
let you choke on all your rhetoric
as thick and sweet as arsenic
we’ll build a new reality
with music, paint and poetry -
when art is made invisibly
we’ll learn to live life beautifully
the children and the elderly,
the indigent and pedigreed,
will slip the chains of enmity
and close the book on history.
9 comments:
Man, you are a deep deep thinker, as I've always known! And that you express it all in this amazing poetry just blows me away, time and again.
Music, paint and poetry, best things to build with I think. And I can tell you do all 3 with love.
xo
And wow! Was I really first commenter here? Whoo-hoo!!
xo
Oh, Joaquin! This leaves me speechless, and that doesn't happen very often! I think it is the breadth of your message that amazes me so. This could be the absolute anthem for our time! I only hope there are enough musicians, artists and writers to bring some harmony into the world.
This has great sophistication of form, and I would love to hear this put to music and hear that refrain over and over.
The message is timely and needed. Here it is on the blogs, and I'm thinking, "The words of the prophets are written on the subway walls." Your light does shine, and I hope your readers will share that light.
In the wake of the elections this week, the poem resonates.
I liked this stanza best,
"we’ll build a new reality
with music, paint and poetry -
when art is made invisibly
we’ll learn to live life beautifully" and the hope it gives, that a new reality, despite everything else going to crap, is possible.
I hesitate to say this poem would work as a rap song, don't want to offend, I mean that in every good sense. I feel like it would be best hummed or chanted.
Superb! Bravo! And a dozen other such. I should have reread it a few times. I know it will repay doing so, and I will do so, but for once I couldn't wait to get in my response.
I like the sci fi quality to this one. It gets my imagination going.
How do you churn out such quality poetry week after week? Very impressive! I'd support a new music, paint and poetry democracy! :)
J :)
An An(d)them, indeed!
Put it out there, brother. We WILL build a new economy and reality with music, paint and poetry! When words become our currency - instead of flesh and bone - what a better day it will be!
I think we are all sick and tired of the politicians, big execs, and power people everywhere calling the shots. Look what a mess they've made!
we’ll still tear down every rubric
of each populist and maverick;
let you choke on all your rhetoric
as thick and sweet as arsenic
Let this be our call! Fantastic, Joaquin!
jannie - wow - thank you! it's not every day i'm accused of being a deep thinker. :) but i agree that they're the best things to build with. yoo-hoo indeed!
karen - what a relief your words are. i kind of felt i was over-reaching - and maybe i was - but maybe sometimes that's not all bad. thank you - and thanks for the nod to s&g - i'm sure they would've considered "written on the blogroll walls" if it had been written today. :)
teressa - yeah - i think there was some "election fatigue" going on. but i guess i needed a shot of wild-eyed idealism. :) and no offense at all - i don't think i write many slam poems, but this might be one. now i just need to get to a slam.
dave - thank you! your enthusiasm is much appreciated - i think this sentiment must be fairly universal.
rachel - thank you. i guess it does have a sci-fi quality - somewhere between "blade runner" and "v is for vendetta", maybe?
jane - late nights, black coffee and missed appointments. just kidding. thank you - i would too, i think. where's that candidate?
k. - i hope so. i wasn't sure if this would inspire the raising of fists or the rolling of eyes - probably both, to some degree - but sometimes you get tired of knocking and want to kick down the door. it's great to know you feel the same - thank you!
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