tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post813634796224510463..comments2024-01-30T03:00:57.176-08:00Comments on Lyrics & Maladies: Southern Moonjoaquin carvelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-47000658783686751302009-01-22T16:06:00.000-08:002009-01-22T16:06:00.000-08:00This is great! As a West Virginia girl, I can tota...This is great! As a West Virginia girl, I can totally relate... <BR/><BR/>I loved the rhythm - very southern!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-71497060210124345432009-01-20T14:59:00.000-08:002009-01-20T14:59:00.000-08:00You make life beneath that southern moon feel like...You make life beneath that southern moon feel like a place where anything can happen, and much of it intriguing. *smiles* LOVED your rhyme schemes throughout this piece! You made sweet music and enchanting visuals, too!<BR/><BR/>One.<BR/><BR/>LinMoanerplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750801733829859144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-84721667364472879922009-01-14T18:03:00.000-08:002009-01-14T18:03:00.000-08:00I love the all the culture of the south! This poem...I love the all the culture of the south! This poem is truly wonderful I love the subject and the language. You are a gifted writer---<BR/>Excellent!trooping with crowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12607218793470277278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-29895605419757656302009-01-10T23:13:00.000-08:002009-01-10T23:13:00.000-08:00Love it! I had the same reaction that confessiona...Love it! I had the same reaction that confessional had. Such beautiful imagery. I particularly love your last stanza and howlin' at the moon!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-44149897870240284062009-01-09T11:37:00.000-08:002009-01-09T11:37:00.000-08:00"before your farm is bought"How sad and true. I a..."before your farm is bought"<BR/><BR/>How sad and true. I am originally from the South, and I have seen so many of our beautiful farms being sold to make way for housing and commercial development. We are losing some of our agricultural heritage. I don't know if that's how you meant that phrase, but that's what it made me think. :)<BR/><BR/>Love your poem. Reminds me of home. Thanks for sharing.-confessional-https://www.blogger.com/profile/00748898061675190761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-25718705603449740422009-01-08T14:58:00.000-08:002009-01-08T14:58:00.000-08:00Ha Ha!! Love it - Love it - Love it!!I think, you...Ha Ha!! <BR/> <BR/>Love it - Love it - Love it!!<BR/><BR/>I think, you just wrote my biography. *?*<BR/><BR/>I admire your work so very much!K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-56197039676551968112009-01-08T11:29:00.000-08:002009-01-08T11:29:00.000-08:00"I ain’t too close and ain’t too far"It's just rig..."I ain’t too close and ain’t too far"<BR/><BR/>It's just right there where you are<BR/><BR/>:) <BR/><BR/>strange game of hide'n seek<BR/>with the moon, over the creekAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com