tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post6687151021780983319..comments2024-01-30T03:00:57.176-08:00Comments on Lyrics & Maladies: Hanging in the Hushjoaquin carvelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-40020939882770055682009-01-26T22:19:00.000-08:002009-01-26T22:19:00.000-08:00Ah....yes...Thank you.I enjoying exchanging follow...Ah....yes...Thank you.<BR/><BR/>I enjoying exchanging following blog links . I would like to do so with you if you have an interest but I am unable to find the blog following widget on your blog. Do you have one I have missed. If not would you consider getting one?<BR/>Thanks J<BR/>Linda @ Psyche ConnectionsLinda S. Sochahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03281672541959206302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-37111598384158082572009-01-26T22:16:00.000-08:002009-01-26T22:16:00.000-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Linda S. Sochahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03281672541959206302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-9419111072663470672009-01-05T19:38:00.000-08:002009-01-05T19:38:00.000-08:00You have captured a perfect moment! Oh, wow...You have captured a perfect moment! Oh, wow...RachelWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18225401230724459199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-12404699838659831312009-01-05T17:56:00.000-08:002009-01-05T17:56:00.000-08:00It's an alba. Never have I enjoyed breakfast as m...It's an alba. Never have I enjoyed breakfast as much as reading this poem. Beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-16799735583203606262009-01-05T16:42:00.000-08:002009-01-05T16:42:00.000-08:00I whole heartedly LOVED it.I remember these lazy m...I whole heartedly LOVED it.<BR/>I remember these lazy mornings with my husband before the birth of our child! Now every morning (because he sleeps in the bed with us) is nose pinching, slaps to the face, and once in a while a nice kissy. <BR/>I read it more than once and I don't know what to say that would even do it proper justice. Just a beautifully captured bit of complete earthly pleasure. My favorite part was the personification of breakfast "a patient guest"<BR/>Love your site.trooping with crowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12607218793470277278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-70201956676265084802009-01-05T16:15:00.000-08:002009-01-05T16:15:00.000-08:00My Friend,what you've done here was tocapturet...My Friend,<BR/>what you've <BR/>done here was to<BR/>capture<BR/>the simplicity of<BR/>a Lovely Moment...<BR/>and like a<BR/>magician, turned<BR/>it into something<BR/>Epic!<BR/><BR/><BR/>Wow!<BR/><BR/>*applause & finger snaps!*<BR/><BR/>One.Moanerplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750801733829859144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-21049442449168464432009-01-01T19:02:00.000-08:002009-01-01T19:02:00.000-08:00This reads like a lovely relic, a photo on a plate...This reads like a lovely relic, a photo on a plate of sensitized iron. Might be my favorite poem so far. <BR/><BR/>What a perfect rendering of a lazy morning - waking up with the person you love, languidly, and relishing the day!<BR/><BR/>Wording is ultra impressive from beginning to end - <BR/><BR/>Love these lines -<BR/>"and your smooth legs<BR/>on mine<BR/>twist<BR/>and balance<BR/>while downstairs the grapefruit<BR/>is cold and ripe and red."<BR/><BR/>SENSUOUS without being overt. <BR/><BR/>Joaquin, you are one of my favorite poets. I mean it.K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-4945171358740851602009-01-01T09:14:00.000-08:002009-01-01T09:14:00.000-08:00this feels exactly like happiness should feel like...this feels exactly like happiness should feel like...Silly Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05956429013088620447noreply@blogger.com