tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post3413650837230064998..comments2024-01-30T03:00:57.176-08:00Comments on Lyrics & Maladies: The Butcher & His Bridejoaquin carvelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-33262447698791663752009-01-02T01:11:00.000-08:002009-01-02T01:11:00.000-08:00"sixty yearsof simple joys"isn't that the way life..."sixty years<BR/>of simple joys"<BR/><BR/>isn't that the way life should be?<BR/><BR/>like my grandparents, sixty years and some of living together, still alive... i look at them and wonder "will i ever know such happiness?"<BR/>i only hope...Silly Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05956429013088620447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-30030827632389408642008-12-28T13:29:00.000-08:002008-12-28T13:29:00.000-08:00wow, this is hitting pretty close to home right no...wow, this is hitting pretty close to home right now..yet it brought me a sense of solace..wonderfully written...God bless grandparents..<BR/><BR/>more times,,maaga.....https://www.blogger.com/profile/12179112597918435258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-75359188790531541432008-12-23T19:48:00.000-08:002008-12-23T19:48:00.000-08:00You are a great storyteller. Yes, this is a beaut...You are a great storyteller. Yes, this is a beautiful tribute to your grandparents. The wild thing is that as I was reading the poem, I didn't look at the photograph until the end (on purpose...I like to read the poem first). But I was picturing a couple that looked much like this photograph. You did a wonderful job of painting them with your words!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-34104177787292896902008-12-19T18:43:00.000-08:002008-12-19T18:43:00.000-08:00What a wonderful picture! They made a very nice l...What a wonderful picture! They made a very nice looking couple. They look so happy - and honestly, just how I pictured them. You wrote an amazing remembrance in their honor. I know how proud you must have made them. I can see that you loved them very much.<BR/><BR/>Regards,<BR/>KayeK.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-82393636654975250022008-12-19T15:47:00.000-08:002008-12-19T15:47:00.000-08:00yep - grandparents. thought i'd post their picture...yep - grandparents. thought i'd post their picture....joaquin carvelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03193680725157157864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-19622067890725137642008-12-18T14:00:00.001-08:002008-12-18T14:00:00.001-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-91633708324845995522008-12-18T14:00:00.000-08:002008-12-18T14:00:00.000-08:00Beautiful narrative poem. Your poetic devices, rh...Beautiful narrative poem. Your poetic devices, rhythm, rhyme - the compact language and attention to sound are used with perfect poetic flair. <BR/><BR/>I would love to have known this good couple. Their life sounds so idyllic. Forgive me if I pry, it sounds as though they could have been your grandparents? <BR/><BR/>You have painted yet another flawless scene with your expressive words. Thank you!K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7187683434790070953.post-5230641016459340252008-12-18T12:38:00.000-08:002008-12-18T12:38:00.000-08:00thanks for sharing this. i love it.thanks for sharing this. i love it.-confessional-https://www.blogger.com/profile/00748898061675190761noreply@blogger.com